我写的英文版军训打油诗一首

想~想

<>To be excellent as my mate</P>

% [6 K8 C2 P0 f<>The wind blows away the cloud,</P>
<>The sun shines bitterly on the ground.</P>
% l" y, K" W+ i* ~, D<>I feel pain on my feet,</P>
: ]5 N" V; |) `# F) |<>My back is covered with sweat,</P>
<>My knees is shaking,</P>
7 z) P! p4 {) g  n1 F5 b" ?; q. \<>The military training is tiring.</P>
<>But I know everyone will bear the hardship,</P>
$ p5 @3 Z+ z- F. j2 G$ a<>No one will give up.</P>
% V) ~$ r2 m% f, s+ f6 G6 S, G4 D<>With the discinpline in my mind,</P>
<P>I will obey the offical's command.</P>
, h8 ^. k; t& ^6 C7 }<P>I will do my best,</P>
<P>To be excellent as my mate.</P>

风吹沙地

哈哈有意思,不过应该是To be excellent as my mateS吧

<>There're some words that can't be undersstood by me.</P><>How wish you were here!!My Longman!!</P>