08年6月大学英语六级作文最后五道预测题:part1

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of  Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。
3 K8 z6 G1 G8 `+ n* ?9 Z2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。
, V$ a/ S& u* }' q3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。
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审题概述?
这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历；第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可；第三部分，提出建议。

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【范文】
3 P$ t4 z' I8 X: j* a, zImmoral Behavior in Public

To witness ①immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.

①Immoral behaviors in public ②initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ③sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of ①this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ②implementation  and ③cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
" @/ ]+ m1 y& f. RWe all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ①shares the huge responsibility of ②demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.

第一段思路点评
/ U( e) {% k2 X0 `5 K6 k( b% v4 A作文要求第一点，相关经历
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1.immoral behavior in public：直接点题

' L5 x1 i8 q( i  V3 N第二段思路点评
7 m# j( Z! M5 n0 s# R" i不文明行为的影响

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! q+ x# i! {" ~1.immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接
) Y  ?3 j5 Q2 G- P! B$ O7 W" ]& x2.initiate：意思是“产生，发动”
9 y& O! G% R; h3 O* q# _3.sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感”

: I" ~9 q, E+ i9 u+ ]/ Z7 X0 {第三段思路点评
如何改善这些现象

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1.this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，
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  P& o. d( k4 D% i* O7 @9 C; O" w2.implementation：意为“执行，实施”
3.cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率”
$ l* h+ r) X3 q% P2 F4.common good：意为“公益”
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第四段思路点评

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# Q( K- z0 `6 K1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任”
2.demonstrate：意为“展现”